Well, it's been a while in coming, but I've finally gone through and done another editing pass on Something Tookish! Most of the changes are just fixing errors in the text, like regularizing the names of specific moves in places where alternate names (or terms from the original Brindlewood Way game) snuck in, along with fixing the occasional typo or awkward wording. 

I am pretty sure I've fixed everything, but if you see any remaining errors or issues, feel free to let me know in the comments and I'll fix them as soon as I can.